Writing task. Formal letter

Monday 14th April. 2014
Av. Libertad 6665 dpt. 4343

Dear Editor.
Mr Smith, im writing you this letter because i wanted you to know what is Animal Farm really about. The story is not only about some animal's revolution, no, it involves something enormous, a real implicit story about any totalitarian order or dictatorship. It commences all when the humans leave the farm, in that moment, the pigs commence getting stronger and more intelligent than the other animals. First, they create THE "animals rules" that were supposed to be applied to all the animals, but as the time passes, the pigs commence like finding exceptions for them to break the rules in their benefit. And most likely when Snowball leaved the farm, Napoleon and the other pig proceed to live in the house, rule the animals and adopt al human actions or way of living. In a way this represents in a normal revolution when the leaders defeat the goberment and they took power, commence acting as them, becoming the same than the last goberment, the ambition of power consumes them, and they forget about their begginings. That's what happens in the movie, the animals defeat the human's dictatorship, and then the most intelligents ones (pigs) take control and commence acting and doing the same things that humans did and why'd they started the revolution against. You can compare the animals revolution with any other real revolution, for example when Napoleon make the animals build a huge monuments on his honor like it happens in the communist Russia with Stalin.
Sicerely.
Martin Ljubetic Vacarezza