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The old cinema in this neighborhood its like an people repellent, because now people are not interested in old things, so i will give you some recommendations to make this cinema popular again.
First this cinema its too old, and now people look for attractive and new things, a modern cinema. The old style of this cinema passed to the history.
2nd, it have been open too many years and its very deteriorated. I think that a few renovations and a re-opening should be excellent to catch some costumers and make the cinema popular again. And maybe the records of this cinema should be erased because it has more than 1 accident a week, i mean add guards.
Maybe this will cost a good money, but the ingress will pay it. Its just an idea. Good luck.