viernes, 13 de marzo de 2015

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Dear Ms X,
For over the past six years every morning when my students walk in the door I have felt so happy about see them again and my classroom take on life again; being a primary school teacher feels so natural to me. Yet for the past few months was longing for and thinking about a few personal challenge in the field of primary education. As I'm very intrigued by different cultures and languages, I've decided to start looking for a position at an international school.
As a relatively young international school which I would like to be member of pioneering and ambitious team, your school attracted my attention. I also liked the fact it is a Dutch  subsidized school with competitive fees open to a very broad variety of students. Last, I value the multicultural setting of your school added by the experience of living in Amsterdam and the Netherlands, as I think this city and the Dutch culture have much to offer. 
Even though teaching secondary school students might be a future possibility for me, I am initially interested in groups 3-8 because to me, children of these ages are very spontaneous and eager to learn at the same time able to communicate and discuss well. 
I am an open minded person with excellent social skills who tolerates pressure easily. Group management, organizing and planing is natural for me. By graduating in a outstanding technical university and working several years as a consulting engineer and group leader in the field of logistics and genera, management, I developed my rational, coordinating and analytical skills, so I decided to really follow my heart and passion to become a primary school teacher. 
I believe value would be added to you organization with my skills And enthusiasm as well I would appreciate very much to be interviewed so we could discuss more about the job description, my motivation and suitability .
Yours sincerely 
Candidate Y